JOST A MON

The idle ramblings of a Jack of some trades, Master of none

Dec 17, 2013

Black Caiman


Yet another wild-life poem by the boy.

The Black Caiman


The Black Caiman
stalking a canary.
Twice the size of a crocodile
This ultimate predator
is pecked to death.
































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Space Bar
said...





He wanted critique no? I love how death comes to this creature (that I had to look up) from a different element. Not so exciting if he'd been nibbled to death by ducks. canaries FTW.







December 18, 2013 at 2:13 AM



 








Feanor
said...





Very good point, SB. I thought the caiman might be henpecked, but if the canary does the job, why not? Heh.







December 18, 2013 at 7:07 AM



 













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